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Waltz and Decay: Part One

Waltzing amidst death.
Rose petals slip to the floor.
His eyes were so black...

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  • Heroesrox
    March 17

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    Ew. LOVE this. Now, the second part makes more sense to me. Both are great on their own, however. Great job, Steph! HUGS!


  • Luthien Luinwe
    March 15
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    Amazing images, good tension. Great word choice. Beautiful and yet so dark. Wonderful write!


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    March 13

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    very dark indeed. thank you for sharing this with me today and i am so looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie

  • bleeeeee
    March 13
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    what is the meaning of that???????


  • Antipodi
    March 13
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    wow a very powerful dark write poet vivid imagery a perfect flow

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