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treasure

I woke up with my hand on my...
I had a dream where my ex
And I were having sex

Crazy turn the music up and make sure no one can see you sex..

Like if it was in movie and you were watching with your friends
You'd say: Whoa, thats fucking crazy, thats dirty, those two are fiends
I dont know if thats legal even between consenting adults

I woke up and wished I was still asleep
and put that mental treasure in the vault...

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  • Dalaney gold member
    March 21

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    i don't think this is beautiful and nice per the comment below....

    i think this is raw and rather funny, although i can identify with

    the part about wishing to still be asleep...

     

    love, lane

  • Awesome poem.


  • hamid
    March 12
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    Beautifull and nice!!!