Verse 1
never felt the sunlight on my face
i'll be gone one day without a trace
just a memory in someones mind
a tiny moment in time
Verse 2
one half of another unwhole
like a sad sad story untold
empty pages in a book
that i hold
Chorus
and your shadow holds me So tight
takes away my every breath and every fight
leaves me cold and in the dark
i'm in your shadow
Verse 3
what happened to my dreams
all the things i should have been
they've fallen by the wayside
and i still hear their cries
Bridge
So much time has passed me by
never made it in this life
Each dream shot down in flames
each memory so filled with pain
Verse 4
and as i walk this lonely road
my nothingness is a heavy load
and i carry it with me
all the time
Chorus
and your shadow holds me So tight
takes away my every breath and every fight
leaves me cold and in the dark
i'm in your shadow
Repeat till fade
Author notes
written to the instrumental "Halo" by beyonce knowles
What did you think
Comments
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lovin' it
I think you've got some great ideas here, look forward to reading the the finished version.
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I like it
I feel related to it, know not how but I just do....
Very good
I don't know what to say on suggestions to help you with it though sorry Mike ^^
I'm not good at that sorta stuff
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i am not much of a lyricist, but i think
work on the chorus a bit...
i repeat it in my head...and i dont know what the music is...and how it will sound with that...but chorus should be repeatable, as it makes the song grow on you...
the song has prospects, but it needs work...
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I like what you got here,
Do you want any suggestions to help you finish it?
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