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triad

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the still orchard wakes
and hundreds of stark limbs bow
to the wind's quiet might

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sweet scent on the breeze
as boughs of Chinaberry
shed tender blossoms

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woven 'round branches
moonbeams kiss the sleeping earth
through a veil of blooms

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