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My Soulmate's Endeavor



A rose of blue,
I won't eschew.
Soulmate,
I will equate.
I shall know
true meaning
of being,
like Descartes.

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  • tears.of.silence
    April 17

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    very short and sweet. straight to the point. great work. i think that although you got your message across, it would have better if you had made it a tad longer. you've got 2 points for this contest giving you a 3 so far. thanks for entering.kahy


  • Zenda-Lokki
    March 13

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    An interesting piece written with so few words but managing to say so much.

    Am a bit confused over the structure of the poem as the ryhimng scheme seems a littel haywire.

    Congrats on the previous Bronze trophy.


  • lovingpoet
    March 12
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    very nice poem thank you


  • Broken-Rickie
    March 11
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    great job and congrats...


  • Heroesrox
    March 11

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    Awesome job! Love the simplicity of the piece, the color scheme and the background! Great job and great take on the prompt! I also like how bits rhymed! Good flow!

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