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Otherworldy

(A haiku)

Were it not for my
lack of otherworldly wings,
you'd hear swoosh, swoosh, peace.

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  • J Macabre gold member
    March 11
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    Hm. i don't know.
    And that's a lot of the reason why its good.
    I like when i have to think.


    • Padfoot
      March 11
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      Thanks for your comment! I'm uncertain about it, too. I think the last line makes it seem sort of choppy.. I just couldn't get it right!