You leave me weak
I fall to my knees
It's your seducing ways at their peak
and our goal is to please.
Teasing with a touch
as stroking your breast
Feeling sensations & such
while temptations manifest.
My body starts to tremble
from this hold you have on me
The sweetness you resemble
and simply pure ecstasy.
I stroke your skin
with my tongue
Feeling your heart beat faster within
while for you the stars are hung.
The way you breathe
up and down my chest
Helps me to believe
you are the best.
I run my tongue around your spot
while placing my finger inside
I make sure to get you wet & hot
while you see there's nothing to hide.
I then place myself deep within
as true pleasure is released
So many times again & again
we've done so much more than teased.
Your soft angelic voice
as you moan while I please
I hope to bring to life
all your sexual fantasies.
Author notes
Option 2
A contest entry
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Comments
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Wonderfully erotic and sensual. Thanks for entering the contest and best wishes to you. From begining to end, you keep the reader in anticipation of what's going to happen next.
Very nice!!
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Really great sensual write! Thanks for sharing and best wishes in your work!
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Pleas put wich option and other info in AN as requested. I shall come back to comment
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It is done with class, and hot to boot.
Nice one here my dear nephew.
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Well, she obviously like it. I think it's a wonderful erotic piece. Filled with great imagery and passion.
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Wonderful
Very erotic and so well expressed. Such great descriptions. Thank you for sharing
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So hot...I love this. Simply amazing babe...
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