isn't she still breathing
through nicotine stained fingers
lying prostrate on the floor
she never had it so good
never since that first time
eventually this is all a bad dream
its a fucking tundra
her cracked lips issue no apology
standing dazed on the corner
she never wanted it so much
but it's never like the last time
someday we'll all know the truth
laughter is the best medicine
her feet wedged into too small shoes
weighing heavily on the scale
she never gained it so soon
never since the unrequited time
who honestly believes this shit
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poem reads like a boxing match( for me that good)
it's great love it
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The armor is off in this piece
I love when people show their vulnerability. Well done o brave one
Not only is this well written, it grabs you by the throat and pulls you into the event itself - Bravo!! Peace
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Wow, this is similar to what I am feeling. Like I have lost the connection to what I have no clue. Well done.
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it sounds like an emotional rollercoaster
and all the ups and downs that go along
with it..
*been there screamed let me off!!*
This is fantastic
I love the abstract poetry
It is always fun for me to try and
figure them out and apply personal
meaning...
needless to say
I enjoyed muchly!
Thanks for sharing
~Pastel
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Wow!
I honestly don't know what the last line is supposed to intend but the poem was amazing!
I'm definitely reading more of your poetry after this
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i can honesty say i have no idea either...it's just the exact thoguht that came into my head at that moment and i decided to leave it...because i just felt that way in that instant i guess...thank you so much for the praise!!
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