Once there was a young man holding a bouquet in the rain
Once there was a woman who was running this way
Was there a time like this in any ballet?
Rain pouring through torn sky
His lips wet and eyes seeking fading
Time ticks and tocks faster than pouring drops
Cold breeze burning his heart
He stood there like a wall with a cold chest
She came running through the distance far
Her gown strafes and laces stroking apart
Her thighs moving splashing the rain
And there she came and there she came
with love in her eyes and him in her heart to blame
was there a scene like this in any other part
he stood there in the cold rain, falling from the velvet sky
she stood there calming her pounding heart
with eyes to eyes the stared each other
his bouquet left to fall in the rain
a bullet came though his arm
red drops falling from his vest
she cried loud even heaven could hear
all the wait couldn’t end here
the man with bouquet fell down with the falling drops
his eye are numb and his heart is cold
he lied there like a fallen drop
and there she cried with trigger in her hands
her love had killed her lover
five bullets in
and sixth one shot
she falls down with an empty revolver..
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by A B U Y I
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wow the urgency in this write as amazing I read it very fast at first and then slow and then again! three times I read this and three times I loved it!!!
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thanks dear for lovely words and applauds
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Wow, I was not expecting this poem to take such a drastic turn like this. Usually poems that begin with two lovers and end this way are very dull and dark, this poem however did not seem dark, but almost an accidental killing. Very well written.
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thanks.. this is not done yet .. this is still in its draft... hopefully i will rap it up before the contest ends
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Touching...
love is a twisted- beautiful story.just as this one.
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humz. a love triangle?
kafi sansani khez thi
well penned, good wording, nice images and background
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the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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why
this is good but wht would you write something like this?
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simply because i can. thats good enough reason for me to write this!!
dont wrry its just experimental word vomit..
thanks for ur applauds dear
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