Sorry babe for all the trouble he gave
I know he hurt you, I can see ya crying in your cave
He’s so annoying and don’t know much bout gurls
The hurt he caused you may never heal
But why do you hide it and never reveal ?
He’s so bad but you’re always forgiving
You so sweet so loving and caring.
But he’s always the same
Now Stop pretending who is he ?
Sorry babe that’s no one but me.
Author notes
5. Most painful memories
I’ve been so annoying to this gurl and always am, she cares and worries bout me a lot tho but I’m always being rude to her with mind of ma own,
Really sorry babe! 
A contest entry
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525 points, ended April 9, 19 entries
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hey i liked this its very good very sad too..
this poem bring me back those old memories bt its good luv it ur very talented boy
gud job remix !! keep it up!!!
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It's good, very good
You are a very tallented person. It matters not what our age is, just what we feel inside of us. I can see, you will be going places, in your future. Keep up the good work. Wish you had more poems for me to read. Take your time and work on some, from the heart.
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wow
even tho u didnt use proper english and grammer that was rlllllllllllllllllllllllllly good and rllllllllllllllllllly sad
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This was a really good write Unfortunately so many have this happen to them. Look before you leap at times is the best advice. Thank you for sharing
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Interesting
I'm way out of my league readin yor stuff man
but this was cool
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awh,Thats cute...
I like this.write more.=) -
wow this is really good "i know he hurt you i can see ya crying in your cave" you are one smart cookie... lol this is a very good write....if this girl cares for you so much u should do something bout tha
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sweet good write! thnx for entering
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Wow at first i thought
you were talking about like
you best friend getting mistreated
by a guy I was surprised at the ending
"Now Stop pretending who is he ?
Sorry babe that’s no one but me."
Hope everything works out for you
Great Write and
Thank you for entering
Good Luck
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This was a good one. The ending was a surprise! But very cool.
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cool i like it
its so nice of you to say your sorry
by the way im mikes gf -
True love indeed. Beautiful write.
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wow good poem I guess that is true love
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this is really good. a good apology. i hope everything works out. nice poem :]
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do you like this girl? as in more of an friend?
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i liked it, sounds farmilar.....
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