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Undying Love

I licked the nape of your neck last night,
When we led; I held you tight,
Then when I awoke;
the first words you spoke -
'I love you Alex, and always will',
I ask - 'then why on earth do you take those pills'?
They change your mood, love and emotion,
yet I stay; pure devotion,
I couldn't love another as I do you,
forever i'll stay, loving and true,
Skin so soft; my black haired beauty,
to watch over you is my duty,
I kiss your lips and hear your heart,
mine crashes and burns when we are apart,
please stay with me my rose my dove,
For what I am giving; undying love.

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  • Darkend Light
    August 25
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    i love this one. its amazing!!!!!!1

  • oow yay i like!!!..no..scrap that..i love!!
    it kinda reminded me of the book "Scream For Me" by Karen Rose. its like a romantic thriller and the girl in the book is called Alex, and she takes pills to kill herself too, so wen i read the name and the pills thing, it just matched perfectly.
    awesome write!
    and read the book its amazing! XX


  • SilkyWhispers
    March 11
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    LOVED IT!!!!!!!




  • YAY!?!?!?! where did u go?