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School Days

Crowded halls and constant noise
brazen flirting girls and boys
Warning bell now shrilly sounds
shouts and laughter~footwear pounds

Silence echos in the halls
empty shadowed bathroom stalls
One lone girl is running late
tardiness has sealed her fate

Frozen terror steals her scream
comprehending not a dream
Dirty rag now covers face
world she knew had been replaced

In the basement dirt and grime
losing track of day and time
Sensing that she's not alone
then a noise sounds like a moan

Wearing something on her head
wonders if she might be dead
Then she feels a searing pain
~cause she can not ascertain

Struggles now to get away
tightly bound she starts to pray
Breathy laughter stops her pleas
almost sounding like a wheeze

Thing removed right off her head
'put it back!' she thinks instead
She is naked hanging there
something's missing she's aware

Blood has pooled beneath her feet
with other things she had excrete
A child is coming close to her
yet this thing has horns and fur

It's mouth is full of pointed teeth
and manhood out of tiny sheath
It closes in and takes a bite
heart just stops in extreme fright

Crowded halls and constant noise
brazen flirting girls and boys
Warning bell now shrilly sounds
shouts and laughter~footwear pounds

Just another normal day
who to choose to come and play

A contest entry

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  • DarkHunter
    March 16

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    Bloody hell glad I wasn't at school with you This is a seriously good horror write filled with terror. Excellent work and best of luck in the contest.


  • Short but cute
    March 16
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    Scary and awesome!


  • maralisa silver member
    March 11

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    oh my word this is realy scary wonderful for the promt good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • Desire gold member
    March 11

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    OMG~

    Holy Mother of Pearl Jam
    I was having a Silent Hill- Saw- Friday the 13th- The Omen plus every other horror movie moment
    Excellent this is and what a tale weaved- kept me on the edge of my seat~ Oy!!!
    I tried to turn away but felt compelled to read more- had to look back
    had to stay until the end
    Wahooo~ Yep You Good
    Tight rhyme~
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Voice
    Best wishes always Sweet Soul
    Many Blessings in the contest too
    with much love and light~ Desire~*~


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    March 11

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    True horror in this write! Very scary read. Detail just enough to hint at how horribly this victim is suffering.

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