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Wind

Hush,
  Listen....
      Can you hear her?

Shwaaah, Shweeeh, Shwoooh.

She's singing to you!

Shhhh,
  Watch...
    Can you see her?

Damance, Domance, Doomance.

Hehe, She's dancing for you!

Patience,
  Learn...
    Do you understand her?

Tch, Tach, Twaah.

She's Teaching you.

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  • such an awesome job with this; again a bit on the nursery rhyme side and doesn't really have much moral or meaning but all the same i loved it :]
    thanks for entering