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Then There Was You..

... Before There Was You...


Drifting;
Falling;
Farther from light

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Alone;
Deserted;
Happiness out of sight

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Days turned to months;
Months to years
The future, just a blur
Eternity amongst unshed tears

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...Then There Was You...


Never thought these days of grey,
Would disappear forever.
Amazing what 3 words can do,
When you fall to love another.

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Your touch;
Your kiss;
Brightens my darkest days

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Visions once blurred,
Blind my way, nevermore.

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These tears I cry,
No longer stain with hate.
My hearts fills with joy,
Each memory we create.

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I never thought I'd find a love so true,
God answered my prayers
The moment he gave me you♥

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  • Time focus on Me
    March 28

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    hi

    Days turned to months;
    Months to years
    The future, just a blur
    Eternity amongst unshed tears

    ღ


    ...Then There Was You...


    Never thought these days of grey,
    Would disappear forever.
    Amazing what 3 words can do,
    When you fall to love another.

    ღ


    Your touch;
    Your kiss;
    Brightens my darkest days

    ღ


    Visions once blurred,
    Blind my way, nevermore.

    ღ


    These tears I cry,
    No longer stain with hate.
    My hearts fills with joy,
    Each memory we create.

    ღ


    I never thought I'd find a love so true,
    God answered my prayers
    The moment he gave me you♥

    Hey ure work is beautiful and amazin it is...u have beautiful talent.. Keep da ink flowing.. U done a alsome job


  • Ishtar
    March 26

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    I want to cry when I think of how far you and I have come!

    Look at us now: Smiley, silly as always and in love! WEE!


    I love love lovelove love you!!!!!!! You need to write more often because you're super good. <3


  • kirbysman Moderators member
    March 12
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    Awww

    Not sure how long I've known you, over 2 years I'm sure, but these are wonderful words coming from you and make me SMILE about that big. Amazing isn't is how life surprises us sometimes. YAY YOU!

    Great write, ma'am, and a long time coming too.

    Love ya,
    Paul


  • Lysithea
    March 11
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    It was a vision of a previous life, yeah. Just tried to write it as best as I could.

    Thanks for the lovely comments, Vampira.


  • vampira1665 silver member
    March 11
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    Beautiful

    I had to read again. That was soooo pretty, I really liked it.

  • vampira1665 silver member
    March 11

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    That was beautiful. Sounds like me and my boyfriend. I question though, where is the vision? Was this a past life vision that you had?

    Again, so very pretty, good luck and thanks for entering!

    vampi

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