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The sky was fiery red as I ran from the living dead

 

Putrid smell of death filled my lungs

and I gasped for air almost

too foul to breathe as I awoke

to the shrilled wail of

a frantic baby crying.

 

I was in a musty room

on a creaking floor so dirty

it felt like ground, and then came

the sound of a thousand moans

in the near distance.

 

I noticed a crimson light

like an eerie dawn breaking through

dusty boarded windows.

 

Leaping to my feet, heart pounding

I discovered the faint flicker of

a candle, on a table in a corner

and a note that simply read

“run for you life.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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This poem is based on an actual nightmare I once had.

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  • Terrifying

    Radiant poem it left me wanting more and told an entire story well done
    Good luck in the contest.

  • wow! would have hated to have this nightmare!
    Just glad it was your dream and not mine..I would have been up the rest of the night .
    creepy and chilling write.

  • spookked the clappers out of me chilling indeed i relate well to the first line the smell of death entering lungs mmm deep dark stuff thanks for the entry and good luck .. going to gargle right now.

  • This is awesome. Very feakishly awesome.


  • geckogirl silver member
    March 12
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    that is freakish, wow, thanks for sharing

  • ... the mind wanders off again!
    keep a tumbler of water beside your bed.

    Juls


  • Desire gold member
    March 11

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    OMG~


    Holy Mother of Pearl Jam~ You have brought forth much for the Mind to beg with mercy especially the last line- and then with the AC note- Gosh-
    Ahuh- I'm having a flashback-
    Have you checked the children?~ phrase
    Brrrrrrrrrrrr~
    Excellent this is my Friend!
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Voice
    Best wishes always Sweet One
    Many Blessings in the contest too
    with much love and light~ Desire~*~

  • lol. was this a haunted house. I used to hate old houses as a kid? ghosts seem to hang out there, at least we were told that. I know about nightmare, had a few myself.


  • LittleMoon silver member
    March 11

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    Wow, this is very different for you MJ. A nice spooky write, glad it is your nightmare and not mine. Sheila

    • MJ Donnelly gold member
      March 11
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      Oh honey, believe me, I awoke from this one in a drenched cold sweat.

      I mean, have you ever had a nightmare so real that you saw colors and smelled things?

      Thanks for reading


  • Myjoy gold member
    March 11

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    Oh wow!!!! yeah thats a freaky thing to dream about that is forsure. I had nightmares, I am always afraid one day I wont wake up. Well done, this was a good visual but a scary one as well.


    • MJ Donnelly gold member
      March 11
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      Thanks sweetie, and my dream journal is always a sure place to find poetic inspiration.

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