Now the doll of death is made,
now shall the tune of death be played.
For as Hell Fire, is bright and hot,
so pain and torment shall be his lot.
I call upon the Lord of Hell,
"Witness this, my accursed spell".
"He, on whom this spell I cast,
shall be tormented till the last.
Muscles rot, limbs racked with pain,
with final pin, shall he be slain."
"Lord of Darkness, Lord of Hell,
listen whilst my price I tell.
For this service I will thee give,
my soul and every day I live.
I'll salute thy regle power,
even in my dieing hour.
And should I stray from my chosen path,
may Astroth visit me in wrath".
So with every shiny pin,
rob him of a further limb.
|Let him die, bit by bit,
let him suffer from a fit.
Rotting leg and rotting knee,
let his rotting eyeballs see.
And when he's just a screaming mass,
I'll then send him to Hell at last.
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wow, there's a lot of potent poison penning going on there, and wicked curses, and satanic verses, wonderful stuff, I particulary like all the rotting limbs and eyeballs. Sounds like something Aleister Crowley might have cooked up. loved it well done, P.S. just a couple of spelling blips on lies 15&16 regal, dying
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Very nice. i could feel the hate off of this. well done and thank you for entering.
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Scary work of poetry flyfly! You caught my attention with this!
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HI Kevin
Thanks for commenting on my little stanza. I was actually thinking of putting it to music and dancing round in circles chanting.(ha,ha, only joking of course)
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I love this very scary
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Many thanks, short but cute
Thank you for the award, I'm pleased it was able to catch your attention.
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