Dark angel of mine
Features Devine
Has my heart in her fist
This is love with a twist
Bleeding through my shirt
As I'm kicked in the dirt
It all leaves a stain
While I cry out in pain
Dark angel of mine
Tells me I'm fine
Gives me something to lose
As I bleed on her shoes
Licks off the tears
While she fights off my fears
Her eyes tell a story
Of anger and glory
But the words that she speak
Lift me up from the weak
Dark angel of mine
Your love is a sign
I was made for more
Than this judgmental war
You’ve shown me to care
And I try not to stare
As I learn more through your eyes
Of deception and lies
But they continue, to say
There’s more than betray
There can be faith in each other
And love for another
Dark angel of mine
Your eyes seem to shine
As you look down into me
Into my soul, you can see
That you've captured my heart
And I'm willing in part
Dark angel of mine
Cross your own line
And tell me I’m yours
Fall in love with my flaws
Dark angel of mine
Our bodies entwine
Our hearts in synch
Our breathing pattern link
You're not the dark you think you are
You’re not an angel but neither far
You’ve picked me up off the ground
Care and love I have now found
To me you'll always be
An angel,
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A contest entry
- dark love/ bi or gay romace by snakeprincess742.
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LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT
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Aw wow hun!!
This is amazing. I love this. Well done!! x -
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thank you so much
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Welcome to AllPoetry!
This is a great poem - I really like the way that you have expressed your thoughts and emotion in this way
my favourite part was the opening - it has such a powerful feel to me and kept me hooked I think from a constructive criticism point you might like to look at the line "but the words that she speak" because although it rhymes, it doesn't make grammatical sense - but that is just my opinion and I enjoyed this poem!
Welcome to the site, I hope that you enjoy your time here at AllPoetry!
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Thank you! much appreciated, ill work on that line, thanx for the help
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Welcome to AllPoetry
Interesting ~
Quite an emotional write, there is depth, darkness, sadness, sensuality and a ton of imagery and emotions that just flow together to engage the reader from beginning to end
Fantastic poem
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thank you ^_^
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