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Sinner!

 

 

 

if only they knew,
she would never be what they wanted

she tried,
clean, wholesome
looked the part


inside she was anything but -

morals of an alley cat,
secret life far removed
from church and duty



pleasure was her only goal!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt.
10. Goody Two Shoes - Adam Ant

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  • Dalaney gold member
    March 21

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    ahh, the many cloaks we wear   very nice take on this title.  thank you, sue, for entering.  love, lane


  • Cup-a-Joe
    March 15
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    More comman than a lot of people think.
    Joe

  • Purrsanthema
    March 11
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    You'll find the wword in the age of the works of Dryden and Pope.


  • hawkeslake gold member
    March 11

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    Absolutely smashing! I think we all knew someone like this, if we weren't that person ourselves (lol!!! -- some of us have speckled pasts ) Well done, as always. Lita

  • Very nice take on the song, Hon.. You got it down pat!

  • Nice take on the song prompt Sis.


  • Thomas Scott gold member
    March 11
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    I know her.

    She sat behind me in history class.
    Good stuff, Sue.
    Best of luck in the contest.


  • Amera gold member
    March 11

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    I don't see you write free verse often but when you do it's amazing. I guessed the song before I got to the AN.

    Love,
    Amera♥

  • Bob Fox
    March 11

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    Wow

    Tell it like it is gal. My now this might stike a cord with some here on AP. excellent gutsy write.

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