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starlight, star bright.

we are now the spring.
former shells of what we used to be, but we are still a we.

i reach out to sky
and sit you in my palm.
I believe you are my essence,
you are beautiful.

i have thought about you for years
so now i wonder
if you still have the same devotion for me.

i want to grapple through the mesh
and just hold onto you.
i am longing for you,
in every sense.

these dark little rooms
will never light without you.


i am filling up these days
hour upon hour with you.
i believe i love you in a way i never thought i'd feel.
i know i never want this to end.
you are the sun that has stopped me from dying,
you crossed over and revived me.

if the world was empty in the winter,
would you still love me?

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11th March 2009

He is my best friend and I never want to be without him again.

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  • bird-mad girl
    March 11

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    the two opening lines really grabbed me. I like how you stated that a change took place but you're still "we" still together.

    "sit you in my palm."

    -that made me think of thumbelina.

    "these dark little rooms
    will never light without you."

    -that was really special and made me feel light and warm.

    "if the world was empty in the winter,
    would you still love me?"

    -that's a beautiful ending.

    aww hun I'm so glad that you've found someone who's helped to lift you up and make you stronger this is such a sweet piece and it's just overflowing with care.

    love you.


    • petrichor
      March 11
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      it isn't anyone new. it's my ex boyfriend, things have happened and i just feel i have my best friend back.

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