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Radiant Beauty

Drifting off into night.
In the midnight hour
When dreams excite.

Within a peaceful slumber dream
Floating among the distant stars
Radiating with her own gleam.

A shining star among stars
In a blanket of darkness
concealing imperfect scars.

With beauty from within
in her far away place
where she is as lovely as sin.

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  • hisaddiction
    April 15
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    aww,

    I do so love this!


  • delightfulmess silver member
    April 13

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    Very beautiful and alluring words you have penned. Great job and thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • Flowering Star
    March 15

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    "Within a peaceful slumber dream
    Floating among the distant stars"

    These two lines seem disjunctive.

    I like the mystery of the "She" and the serenity of sleep. I love sleep. . . I'm probably one of the few teenagers in the world who values sleep so much.


  • Cannonsfire
    March 11
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    better than sin I'd wager