time is not where i found you,
it is not when i love you
time is merely another place to hold you, to express
to you and remind you
time is not where we began
time is not where we love,
it is a place to love,
and to be loved.
like our late night drives to the corner store,
not really caring whether it be open or closed,
its the drive together that truly matters
its the cherished little sips we share.
Filled with these sensations,
the soft warm scent of safety's vulnerability
the window down, the music high, our hands naturally nestled,
laughter and compassion is an astral breath,
you look through me,
you look with me
as I to you
nothing is said
but exhales
and warm chuckles.
in fractured time a stillness settles,
it is then and there in-between
the unseen and the felt,
the unconsciousness and the awareness
aches a feeling of innate familiarity,
its ricochets through every muscle and every touch,
defying logic, reason and comprehension
its the taste of innumerable miles upon miles of vast expanses
the taste scent smell and feel of Serenity's peace.
its the sweet natural ease, and simplicity
its love. not. formed in time.
time is not where i found you,
it is not when i love you
time is merely another place to hold you, to express
to you and remind you
time is not where we began
time is not where we love,
it is a place to love.
and it is the place where i will hold you
as life goes on by
Author notes
not done
A contest entry
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Comments
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MELT
... utterly speechless ...
wow!
xox

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wow...thats so beautiful...but i think u can restructure the verses a bit... the meter is not up to the mark...but loved those emotions...they are true and pure...

Good luck -
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i agree it needs some work but my heart is there
just need to play the tune better
any suggestions?
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