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True love's Descent


Our love held strong
through raging rivers
that swirled through mountains
and found shelter under trees

There we found truth
for our love we knew
was truly meant to be
our Soul's intertwined

The crystallized formations
where we sat and enjoyed
picnics upon the breeze
and fed each other our gifts

Through the phone
we held hands wishing
that forever would be
more than you, me...

Combined together,
our truth and love
forever held, onto
One another conformed

Sacred matrimony
bound by more than rings
but by soul's all because
I saw you in my dreams

Before....

You were real...

Author notes

Dedicated to my sister Ashley and her fiance Timothy...

I wish you two all the luck and happiness in the world. Ash, you mean the world to me, and I am sure he will make you the happiest girl in the world. Tim, I am giving you my sister, she loves you, and you love her, and the best thing you could ever do is take care of her and treat her right. I love you both!

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  • wow

    wow this is amzing and romantic great job keep up the good work i love it alot keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day


  • Lowell Poe
    March 11

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    Oh lass, you are such a romantic...
    There is beauty in every word and sentiment here in this fine small piece of your beautiful heart.
    So fine to have someone believe in you...
    to care....
    this funny old world is so lonely....
    I love the way you write.....
    you are always so kind to my endeavors and attempt at this thing that we love so.

    God Bless you
    little gypsy,
    Lowell Poe


  • rinzurajan
    March 11

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    omg...amazing...!!! thats so beautiful...every word is oozing out love so pure and true...





    Good luck