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L.O.V.E

Love
  L.O.V.E
      Love

The four letter word
  that can make mountains bow
        and rivers tremble

That horrible lie
  only fools and dreamers
        believe in it

And only fools hope for it
        LOVE

Overused
    Overrated
        Overkill

                            LOVE

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  • Kansas June
    March 12

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    See, I read this and all I can think of is that this, this very poem, is s kind of self-defense thingy. But I won't go there cuz this is cyber space and not the place that particular convo. ;-)


  • Jonbug gold member
    March 11
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    I like the cold, hard truth told here. You pulled no punches and told no lies.