I see you looking at me
With those eyes I could describe
If I could speak clearly
Because honestly you astonish me
And I know I know
Honesty followed by anything must be a lie
Truth is
There's this guy
Yeah you
I'm looking at
He's a strange man
Walking into my life
But God's got a plan right?
One more day
One more month
One more year
This constant waiting only brings aggravation
What a sensation when I'm around you
Cause you do what you do
Speak about the past to promote your future
And the color of your eyes really does suit
Your personality
You are a wonder
And I am not saying you're free from sin
Cause we come from a kingdom
A kingdom of men
We all fall short these days
Lies
Compromise
We live in a haze
But you
You see straight into reality
With an open spirituality
More finite than my own
Cause you made a promise to our Lord
To fight with your words and his sword
I'd happily stand by you
Doing the things that I do
Playing a song
Writing a poem
Maybe if you hear this it might just show
I'm not just a girl looking for a boyfriend
For some hot shot coming round the bend
I'm looking for a partner
I'm looking for a piece
Of me
Maybe together we'd complete
One unit
One mind
One heart
One soul
Because there is
One God
One dream
One plan
One love
Between us
But the question is do you realize this
Maybe together we'd complete
But I will wait
I will wait
Because patience is a virtue
And if I love you like I think I do
I can wait a few years
Wade a few tears
To be with someone
Like you
A contest entry
- Flying Solo by Dalaney.
1000 points, ended March 12, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - SUCKA FOR LOVE by cgirl0410.
1150 points, ended March 19, 36 entries
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1000 points, ended March 20, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - round one; your best prewrite. by August Starlight.
765 points, ended March 21, 93 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I am in love ~ with Vignettes by AutumnGypsy.
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think
Comments
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This is a great piece and something so many people can relate to. Well done. Best to you in the contest
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thanks...i related to this poem at more than one place...it seemed to me that i had written it...as if u read my mind...
good luck
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i love the story and congratulations on the gold the gold trophies are really pretty to me. they look pretty on the pages
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Beautiful write.
Love the whole story.
thanks for entering and good luck. -
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Yea i don't think I can read anymore writings now, I'm going to be closing my contest, and just ending it. I really can't bare to read anymore writes about love, especially when Love is something that seems to avoid me, even though I do everything right. It still avoids me. So Yea good write but my contest is now ended. -
The wait can be hard but the result may be bliss. Nice write, good luck
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Thanx 4 entering. Good luck! - cgirl0410
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What a promis to someone
Someone so special you give an oath to with God.
What a special lady you are. God Bless you little one and keep you safe always...mac
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AWWWWWWW!!!
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They say That in order to find
the girl He has to dig deep into God to find her,
and I think you are doing this now! awesome write !
good luck in the contest!
Blessings
Rend
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Smiles. I think God will honor your desires.
"A Womans Heart Should Be So Lost In God That A Man Has To Seek Him Inorder To Find Her" -unknown
I love this quote.
Anyways, thanks for sharing your words.
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a very wise piece of poetry, yet still has the innocent and youthful feeling
of hope and love. thank you so much for your entry. love, lane
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