Even though it may be cold,
in my eyes the snow is just like gold.
for the fun i always have,
is fun that cant be told.
Now its spring, now I'm sad,
for winter is the best time,
for this young lad
What did you think
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aye snow when you are young, is a great thing, when you are older though it is a pain 'cos it stops everything and you get pretty cold
a good poem.
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boobear
nice poem i love snowboarding
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This is really good. Your details paint a picture as I read it. I love the winter too, I think the snow is beautiful. Anywawy the flow was great. Great job on your poem and keep on writing!!!
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I agree with Hetha. It's the shorter pieces that hold such a lasting impression. Even though I am not fond of winter, I can see why you are. Good job!
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It is sometimes the shorter pieces with the simplest of rhyme schemes, that hold a lasting impression and sweetness in value. This is such a poem. Good job.
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Nice poem. I'm glad you like the winter, someone has to. I't 2 cold 4 me.
Thanks for the comment and taking the time to read me
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Nice and flowing...snow is pretty, gives a renewal feeling for spring to come...hate to see you sad because so much fun is in store if you live near beaches, the beauty that comes out through wintry times...delightful write. Blessings.
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