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No Sex Salty Shade Refreshments

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Palm trees line the golden beaches ... frawns rustling to an island beat.
A new song is sung in the wind ...bringing a smile to all we meet.




Though it reminds me of times since then.
Look closely and you will see...
riding the waves... your still here with me.

As I sit under this salty shade...
sipping my lemonade ...
watching the seagulls parade ...
Passing on their way...
perhaps to the ancient colonnades
in Ephesus.

While stretched out here , my hammock high above the floor
just watching them soar - I'm left here in the south beaches,
sand pipers jump and skip the waves along the shore ...
while the fiddler crabs run side ways avoiding the beaks.

Pelicans, twilight - each head bowed under wing
Each face hidden -as though they were saying grace.
Signifying the night is falling.

Not one lass swayed as they tipped a wing ... no sex on this beach.
you can hear them sing in a melodic hum ...having an island rum. 
All along our golden shores you just leave me asking for more...

Author notes

my life on the shores -still writing
Photos taken by myself - watching a lone surfer in a distance -cheryl howell - Play on words - Sex on the beach (cocktail) for those who do not know -
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Sex on the Beach is a highball cocktail made from vodka, peach schnapps, orange juice and cranberry juice. It is an International Bartenders Association Official Cocktail. Island Rum, Lemonade are drinks. Lemonade is non alcholic beverage and sex on the beach can be made without the vodka.  Drinking should be in moderation and over the age of 21 years old - please drink responsibly.

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  • toomysterious
    September 3

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    I love this, capturing the essence of Florida and the joy of nature. Abso lutely beautiful. Welcome to the group, Lovin the Blues. Hope we see lots of lovely poems and you enjoy your stay.


  • ajocean silver member
    September 2
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    very good


  • Josette
    August 15

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    I like this poem, it's very peaceful and lovely. (honestly I didn't catch the alcohol reference, but it made me chuckle all the same)

    • guardianhost gold member
      August 15
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      Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem

      I'm glad you enjoyed reading it, I had fun writing it,
      Your comment is very kind and I hope you will come back yo visit me,
      Cyber Hugs,
      Cheryl
      aka
      G-Ma to many


  • playjazz67
    July 21

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    Sex on the Beach is a great change of pace, but then it normally is ice tea (in the heat).
    Certainly a super write that started the wave-sounds going


    • guardianhost gold member
      July 31
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      I am glad you enjoyed this one - It happens to be one of my favorites.

      Cyber Hugs,
      Cheryl

  • Bob Fox
    June 22

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    Poet

    A change of pace. Perhaps a view into vaste beauty. No sex on the beach. Now that is different and wonderful.

    • guardianhost gold member
      June 22

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      I am honored that you read me and took time to comment

      Thank you kindly, It means alot to me to have a seasoned writer such as yourself visit me.
      You are welcome here anytime.
      Sincerely,
      Cheryl


  • complic8ed
    June 2
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    i loved how descriptive it was i almost forgot where i was! very well done

    • Thank you for your kindness

      Your comments are wonderful , Thank you for taking your time to read and comment on me- I am glad you enjoyed reading my poem.

  • so your are soo much more than a writer you take me to the movies with your words and pics delightful!

    • What a dear friend you are Glenn

      Thank you for reading and commenting on me.

  • awesome job. I really liked this poem a lot. Has a great flow and a life telling. Excellent work. kahy


    • guardianhost gold member
      April 2
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      Thank you my friend for the comment

      I love trying new avenues...your reading my work means alot.
      Cheryl

  • i would like to thank you very much for this entry into this contest for my friend cheri and to widh you the very best of luck as well. viyanna rosemarie


    • guardianhost gold member
      April 2
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      I thought it might be a cheerful read...

      something to change the subject .
      Best Regards,
      Cheryl


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    March 17

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    This is great, the pictures are beautiful! They add lots of imagrey to this piece. I do think the ... is unnessicary though. But this is well penned, great work! (:

    • guardianhost gold member
      March 17
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      LOL ... thank you for reading and commenting

      it is a take on a mixed island drink - Sex on the Beach is a highball cocktail made from vodka, peach schnapps, orange juice and cranberry juice. It is an International Bartenders Association Official Cocktail. The ingredients may be shaken together in a shaker with ice, and served in a highball glass. according to - Sex on the beach (cocktail)
      From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia ... Sorry if it offended anyone - I will mark my poem for adults only. Really it is just a play on words.

      Sincerely,
      Cheryl


      • Oh.My.Juliet
        March 17
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        I knew there was drink called Sex on the beach but I didn't know it was that mix of juices, Thanks for the enlightenment (:


  • Titus gold member
    March 13

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    I took your title and just nudged it aside to ask, if it were paradise instead? There is much skill in the epic arena, as you've condensed everything into a digestable chuck, and wow, it was an evolutionary experience indeed. This is indeed marvelous stuff, you've written. Tony

    • guardianhost gold member
      March 17
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      Tony, these pictures were take down here at the beach park

      I love to bring my camera , sometimes my paints and stay for hours.
      I took these photos. I hope you liked them.

    • guardianhost gold member
      March 16
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      Thank you for reading and commenting on me.

      Your comment was one of my highlights today when I came back online - I am so glad you like it.
      Tony thank you again - Cheryl

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