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... (I cannot think of a title)

Marilyn Monroe white
Bright light
City nights
Dawn on
Empty skies,
Where streets
Are lined
With your
Broken lies,
Gilded smiles
Can't mask
Glassy eyes.

... Or dying?

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  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    May 4

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    hm, I'm not sure what you should title it. I'm sure you'll think of something great though


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