She [happily] gave him her ♥heart♥
She was h*a*p*p*y, for a while.
Then her world turned
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He gave her back her ♥heart♥, which was in p e i c e s
Saying
“sorry, you can have your heart back, I accidentally broke it”
She was left to try to t-a-p-e her ♥heart♥ back toge-> <-ther
While w/i/p/i/n/g the lonely tears that were
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g from her face
Honesty is the best policy!
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first of all (dont mean to embarrass you or anything) just being honest and an older sister
u spelt 'pieces' wrong ... lol no biggie
um this is pretty good (especially for someone who has trouble expressing their feelings)
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The upside down part was awesome, as was the entirety of this. It's such a sad story and I deffs agree with the title!
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some people are just rude; looking at one of comments that was left. ignore him.
I really liked how you formatted the 'upside down' part. I took me a minute to figure that one out, but I thought it was rather creative. Along with the 'together' part, I really like how you enhanced that word.
nicely done =)
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Kewl layout dude....
Iz dis bowt boo boo??
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