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Red Hot

Full lips dripping with cherry glaze
Eyes spark with fuel for the fire.
A sight to behold in a lustful gaze
Building flaming hot desire.

While glowing in erotic beauty
Petals bloom beneath crimson satin.
With little to hide a luscious booty
Flushed cheeks conjure fantasies of sin.

Burgundy laces cinching tight
Rose sheer covering up to thighs.
Ripe and ready for a very hot night
And for anything else that may arise.

Stepping into ruby latex spikes.
Staring at beauty in the mirror.
Knows his tastes and what it is he likes
The details couldn't be any clearer.

While the hour rings out in chimes
Finishing up on final touches.
Sipping from the finest of Merlot wines
While waiting in her scarlet wrappings.

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  • The D O M
    April 19
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    Excellent I love my erotica rhymed although in places you have resorted to assonance rather than true rhyme. I think this is your strongest piece in the series so far (I know it is anonymous at this stage but I recognise nearly every entrant by their style by now), great stuff and thank-you for your continued support in the series.

    the D O M


  • tomisb
    April 2

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    Is it a tease that raises the blade or the vision of a possession so willing to please, wearing everything he believes to be sexy.
    You paint the scene delishously.
    Love, Tom B.


  • Master Ktulu silver member
    March 13

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    WOW...well done. Extremely tasteful and delightful. I wish you well this round. Good luck.

    **Master Ktulu**


  • Cannonsfire
    March 10
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  • mcfreeman
    March 10
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    The key is here:

    Knowing just what he likes
    The details could not be any clearer.

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