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The Lion and The Bear

How can a Bear fall in love with a Lion?
It's not natural,
Nor is it fair
On that poor Bear.

How can a Lion attract a Bear?
Perhaps it was her charm,
Or maybe her roar;
Like a musical Score.

How can a Bear hide this love so well?
They're meant to be wild!
And uncaring and free!
Well, any Bear but me.

How can a Lion not know what goes on?
They own the jungle!
See and hear all!
Except the Bear's lonely call.

How can a Bear fall in love with a Lion?
I'll tell you just how.
The Lion is very rare,
And this, did fascinate the Bear.

Author notes

Anthropomorphic Poem, inspired by nicknames
A, B, C, C Rhyme Scheme
It's not meant to have a particular rhythm

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  • ryan James gold member
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    The rhyme scheme is really well used, it's simple without you having to rhyme for the sake of it. It sounds lyrical and child-like, which is good because it's such an emotional poem.
    It's awesome, definitely worth as many applauses as possible!