Devil with a blue dress on,
in a pair of new red shoes
to dance the night away
to find herself a fella
in hopes of endless love.
A contest entry
- Ditto by A63-Angel.
700 points, ended March 22, 14 entries
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So, what's your opinion of this?
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who wears a blue dress with red shoes?
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good point
depends on shades and hues, I guess. Maybe you could read a lot into this and decide that our young lady doesn't have very good taste.
Good point.
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reminds me of so many nights ago when each Saturday was spent dancing. great job.
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hmm, i like it short but meaningfull.
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I like it.
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