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Blue devil

Devil with a blue dress on,
in a pair of new red shoes
to dance the night away
to find herself a fella
in hopes of endless  love.

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  • Apocalyptic Scarves
    March 19, 2009
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    who wears a blue dress with red shoes?

    • Judith Chandler
      March 19, 2009
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      good point

      depends on shades and hues, I guess. Maybe you could read a lot into this and decide that our young lady doesn't have very good taste.

      Good point.


  • A63-Angel
    March 19, 2009
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    reminds me of so many nights ago when each Saturday was spent dancing. great job.


  • Just-Meghan
    March 15, 2009
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    hmm, i like it short but meaningfull.


  • charcoal
    March 11, 2009
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    I like it.

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