Ripped and torn.
Pulled this way and that.
Tired of being used.
Sick of being abused.
Will this pain ever end!
You reach out to find no one there.
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Emotional Worry the undoing of millions.
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Oh my this is so sad but yet so good and i really hope you don't have this feeling. I did a long time ago and i didn't have no one there for me and i actually had to pull myself out so i wouldn't end up hurting myself...
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hummm...also very powerful! it sucessfully expresses the pain of feeling alone in ur own life. even tho ppl are there. there not reaching out. they might as well be gone. luv the message! luv that its short too.
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Very good. I loved the ending especially. This sounds like a song. Great job.
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a good poem, sad in its theme, ah pain, it takes us and twists us at times, the ending hints at death or just emotionally numb from all the tears.
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I'm a fan:
I love the title. Very well done. I really understood this. You hit it right on the nail. Well done. I'm a fan!
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This is kind of how I'm feeling right now, you hit it on the nail. This was so emotional, I could just feel it all, I dunno if it's because I'm feeling that way or it's just well written. I think it's just well written . Wonderful write my friend.
Blessings,
~Michaela~
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my sweet dear friend.... im sure its more that you are feeling it rathr than the latter.
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