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The Observer

I am merely an observer.
I don't act on anything.
I just watch.
I only make neutral comments.
I avoid controversy.
I sit quietly.
No one knows my story.
No one will ever ask my story.
Because I am only
the observer.

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  • anakarena
    May 2

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    i like this cause i feel like an observer most of the time..i also like your name "robot in purgatory" cos it describes what i think we are just robots in purgatory waiting for something.. i dont know what


  • bobanonymous gold member
    May 2
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    Yup, you got it partner!