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All I Want is Your Love, for picture prompt #8

Drowning in tears
Of the ocean,
Falling through the sky
Among bright stars
Gleaming in your eye,
You look into my soul
And know that I want
To be submerged in your love.

Surrounded by a pool
Of questions,
Wondering why and how
With the urge to run,
You address the confusion.
And there is none because
I know that I need
To be submerged in your love.

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  • Heva Feva
    March 21
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    so beautiful

    thats a great poem

  • This write is filled with love.
    Wonderful job at capturing it.


  • tsukiyo
    March 10

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    Even though you have it in your title, please place the link into your AN. That way I can refer to the picture easier, and see your interpretation. Thanks!