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Adorning A Lie

Influenced,Ignorant,Unaware
absorbed into your aura,sins
committed,forgotten,fair.
Adorning lies under your skin.
Arrogant,Pestering,Selfish,
lieing and sinning took you far
I made one useless wish
wondering if hell's door lay ajar ..
May you suffer ,like you made me undyingly cry,
you'll never be happy,no matter how hard you try.



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I Don't Know What I've Penned !
RULES MUST BE FOLLOWED !
Prompt:Adorn

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  • crivanea
    March 18, 2009

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    well.even if u don't know what u penned...the result is quite good...the immediate impact is strong, you have too many strong nouns that takes away depth from your poem. still, good job overall