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white coffee.

coffin
white coffee
he didn't know which to blame more
but he did murder
because of the sun
he remembers clearly
seeing
the eye of the light
so bright so fucking frustrating
he shot once
the man was dead
he shot 4 more times
the man was still dead
vulnerable at last.
white coffee could
turn ordinary men into
robinson crusoes, he thought
and testified
yes i killed a man
because i didn't have anything better
to do
my head was hot.

Author notes

for albert camus.

this is where i will write myself.[these are personal. not something i would like to read in a book... lol... as if?! so don't waste your clappymen on me, please]

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  • Naridill gold member
    September 28

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    The intensity of title and piece worked amazingly together. I adore the bluntness here. Makes me want to read something of Albert Camus.

  • 'white coffee' must be one of the greatest titles I have ever read. I was instantly piqued.

    J


  • parachute fog
    March 12

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    the existentialist anti hero of whom was my tom sawyer, (and not the Great Gatsby) when i was a child


  • autarky
    March 10
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    the stranger. fucking insane book.