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Adore

i will adore you forever
from my grave

from my heaven i
will watch you

i will always be
beside you

remember
i am just one
heart beat
away

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  • crivanea
    March 18, 2009
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    i think you're using the word adore...and the word I had listed is adorn


  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    March 16, 2009

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    Wow this is an amazing, beautiful write. It's so simple and so sweet. You've written a beautiful poem here. Great write!


  • badnovocaine
    March 14, 2009
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    Aw this is beautiful and sad, it just goes to show that love never dies.


  • A floatingleaf silver member
    March 10, 2009
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    Very pretty...