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Kiss me

Lets stand here
by the wall. Look
into each other's
eyes. Minute after
minutes passes. Lean
in and Kiss me.

Kiss me sweet.
Kiss me soft.
Kiss me tender.
Your soft lips touch
mine as we kiss.

Soft lips a sweet
kiss. Kiss me while
the moon is shining
bright. Under the stars.

Kiss me in the rain.
Look into my eyes
and kiss me until
the world ends.

Author notes

Favorite color: Red

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  • lovingpoet
    March 12
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    thanks for entering very good work


  • Selithia
    March 10

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    wonderful!

    I smiled while reading this! Kisses are indeed a part of love and I love how you incorperated kissing in the rain and kissing until the world ends! Great Piece and good Luck in my contest! Red is a very nice colour. =)
    -Megan