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as always, im me...with a few this and thats.

Running always running,
Laughing being random,
Dancing like a maniac!

I'm a  sister at heart,
a girl in age,
a brother in annoyance, (lol)

Ahhhh....
Sleep!
My favorite.

A sister is who i am,
what i love,
what i want.

I have that innocent face,
hiding that mess i made,


you can't help but smile back,
cause that is my way of charm.
teeheehee I'm your little sister!

Author notes

lil sis

picklez are good

1. Write about yourself. The individual you are. Be proud of who you are. Write about what sets you apart from the rest of the world

Option 1- Tell me about you

Hiya, my name is Tera, I am a 17 year old girl, um....I like all kinds of music, i know that sounds general but its true, I listen to pop and hip hop like black eyed peas and Rihanna i listen to rock like Ozzy and pink floyd, I also listen to hard rock like Korn and Avenge seven fold, then i listen to foreign music pop like K pop and J pop specially the bands S.H.E. and fahrenheit. and almost anything else, those are just my favorite bands, i listen to country too but not very often, I like animals, and i love being little sis even in real life!! I have a horse named Lady, she is an Egyptian Arabian, gray coat and really pretty, um... anything else you wanna know just message me and i will tell you...usually.

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • Salty Hibiscus gold member
    June 5
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    cute and cheerful background. sleep is my middle name!


  • Kathraina silver member
    May 16

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    Aww this is such a cute piece!
    Amazing flow and imagery here. I love the light-heartedness to it!
    Bravo


    ♥ kate


  • grammabuff
    May 2

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    The title is good because you moved beyond the ordinary with the this and that. The poem is sweet with that little bit of sass in the ending. Uppity women unite!


  • the wrong joke
    April 21
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    i like it. good job. i think u r the first little sibling. lol.


  • MysteriousWhisper
    April 20

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    Aw! This is so cute! Sounds like you are a really outgoing and fun type of person! I like that a lot! Anyways I accept your offer of lil sis! good luck in the contest!


  • tears.of.silence
    April 16

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    aww you've done a really good with this. You've made a 15 for this poem. You've got a toal of 40 points. Great work. Thanks for entering and best of luck to you. kahy


  • Aajdj
    April 3
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    lol


  • Umi Juvariel
    March 25

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    This was happy and wonderfully bright, and a welcome change from the poems I've been reading. Thank you for entering. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.


  • Gunther gold member
    March 19

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    You show an outstanding personality in this peace.
    Your spirit really does make you smile. Nicely done


  • shelbymarie
    March 17

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    I wish I had a little sister... I am the little sister. Thank you for entering it was an enjoyable read.


  • August Starlight silver member
    March 15
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    Awh, this is really cute.
    Thanks for entering and good luck.


  • Lanasaur
    March 15

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    Lovely!

    This is really cute. good luck to you!

    Have a nice day!
    Lana
    x


  • daviscth silver member
    March 12

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    I couldn't help but smile while I was reading this. I love the imagery. Thanks for sharing it in my contest today.


  • DeathisSweet
    March 10
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    aww... so cute and i was laughing so much


  • poisongirl13
    March 10
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    I love this.
    its very fun and shows your fun loving personality.
    very good
    ^_^

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