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Nude

cool air meets bare skin
caressing
smooth
ribbons of current flowing over, softly

arms spread wide,
embracing all that is good into self

self exposed
self unhidden
at peace and one,
body and soul

it's not wrong
not shameful
when cool air meets bare skin
when we realize what we are

all alike, under clothes
garments to cover up, to hide
beautiful bodies, all

unashamed

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just thoughts. i'm such a hypocrite.

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  • Andy.
    March 18

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    Too bad the world (humanity) is not so pure and natural any more.
    Great write you have penned/typed here.
    -cheers


  • Broken-Rickie
    March 11
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    this is such a beautiful write...


  • icyrose
    March 10

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    So simple, and so beautiful...

    "When cool air meets bare skin"...I think that says something great and true about humanity...and it's really a tribute to beauty.

    Wonderful words.


    • k.a.s.s.i.e
      March 11
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      thanks. and thanks for agreeing. some ppl think nudity is something to be hidden, something to be ashamed of.


  • hyper thing
    March 10
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    it is absoulutwely true

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