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The Kiss

I dreamed of you, last night.
We kissed, chaste and like the first
So full of possibilities.
Then again and deeper, our tongues
Touching moist and soft.

And naked now, my hand caressed
Your neck, your small and perfect breast.
We danced the dance eternal, natural
Side by side in slow and perfect rhythm
Skin to skin and heart to heart.

Then after lying close and
Smiling, laughing, loving
Kisses soft and sweet
Until claimed again by sleep.
Last night, I dreamed of you

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  • dutch2lips gold member
    April 30
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    aww, so sweet can love be
    thank you for entering!


  • ennovy silver member
    April 21
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    Thank you for entering my contest...novy


  • perfectsunset gold member
    March 16

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    This was a wonderful write.
    Filled with romance & love.

    Best of luck & thanks for entering

  • beautifully sensual piece, well penned poet!

    Jem

  • very beautiful very sensual, I loved it


  • GothicFyre
    March 10

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    Do not revise this poem, I loved every word written here. It worked amazingly and described kisses wonderfully. excellent.


  • SweetLeaf
    March 10

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    this is amazing. It's not dirty, it's sweet. loving someone so much that when you think of them it isn't pure erotica.
    great write.
    EmJo


  • EternalFyre
    March 10

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    This is a rather sensual poem that lays out rather nice the beauty of being with someone you love in such a way. Beautiful! Keep on writing!

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