Everythings good
everythings great
Mom's never going out
on a date.
She lost her head
I found it
it was hiding under the bed
Author notes
well I tried it's 24 words. I liked the picture though. http://pienemien.deviantart.com/art/beheaded-26502918 is where the picture was found.
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Well, mommy's everywhere like the song Rock a by Baby for the same reason... the "the cradle will fall and down will come baby cradle and all" LOL Same scenario, sorta.
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Wow, very gruesome and intriguing piece. Loved the rhyme. This was great.
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Aw. This was sad and disturbing, but a great write. Thanks for the share, and best wishe s to you!
Good luck in the contest!
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Very interesting ~
related to anyone named Lizzy?
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hehehhehe lizzy yeah... guess they were.
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Love the pic with the poem!! haha..... great!!
becca
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yeah me too I thought it fit well.
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Ooooh I like this and the little cartoon is great..nicely done with the prompt..
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I wanted some humor with this dark topic.
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LOL oh I love that picture. hehe
Nice poem too.
Momma done lost her head
If the cops ask I'll blame Fred
If that don't work then I'm dead
It's lethal injection I dread
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loved your version... glad you liked the picture.
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LOl...good addition...
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thanks
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