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unrequited passions

There is a constant reminder
of your presence, a presence,
I long to forget but
we were born to have memories
and sometimes along them,
are unrequited passions.
So easily love can be a gift,
so easily when time passes
it seems like a curse!
Love is like a star,
unreachable in its height
of possibilities, it radiates!
Love lost is like watching
a flower wither away,
like viewing melting plastic,
the lost is slow but definite.

In the younger years,

it was all a game,

as years pass, each lost

becomes more fragile

the heart and mind weathered,

from the oppressed storms.

 

I fell in love with you,

how I thought you wanted

to love me as well.

Your words had no meaning,

meaning turns to verbs

and your actions were disappointing.

The tears flow again,

they're warm and burn my eyes.

They fall and dry on this page,

afterwards, I say to myself,

"I allowed this to happen again."

 

started 1-3-09

completed 03-09-09

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Classic CWM lol

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  • smiley
    March 12, 2009

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    Awesome

    this was a touching piece..... are you torn between love and life or what..... I liked this piece a lot....

    Yvonne
    don't forget I wrote quite few new ones as well.


  • heinzs silver member
    March 10, 2009
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    We always let it happen... it is our nature as human beings.


  • nell
    March 10, 2009

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    This is devine hun!we always we say that we wont allow it to happen again but we always do, we always take that chance that its the 'one' beautiful and haunting work hun...good to see

    Nell


  • NurseChilly gold member
    March 10, 2009

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    ohh this is so sad and poignant curtis. so many hearts to wish for
    you'll find your love, i'm sure of that... totally

    • Cwm
      March 10, 2009
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      Thanks hun! It's just a poem... i'm not sad at all... this is classic me, tho..

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