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a teens life

have you heard the news
have you heard what people are saying
the news is crazy

the words
the voices
the faces
the sentences
all that have been heard before

the faces are friendly
the voices are bitter
the words are nasty
the sentences are ones of jealousy
and for what

the words cause pain
the voices cause tears
the sentences cause hurt
the faces cause betrayal
and for what

all this gossip
that's all it will ever be
everyone done it
that includes me

all this is
a simple disrespect

we hurt one another
and why
is it for spite
out of pain 
what could it be

i drown inside the pain i have
i tell a friend what happen
they tell another

you go to her
why did you do that
the you once had is no more

you cry
you hurt
you forget altogether

another friend came
you talk to them
they earn your trust
and they never brake it

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    June 6

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    This is so true! Gossip is such a terrible thing and yet, we all partake in it. Great work here and good luck to you in this contest!




    Jeremy0826

  • Beautiful work on this piece! I love the way it was written, so down to earth, and so truthful. The emotion and feeling put into this is so, real. Great work on penning this beautiful piece!


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    June 5

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    Today's Featured Poem!!!

    Congrats on the feature today, sweetie! This is well penned, except one glitch...brake should be break...
    over all this is an excellent poem! Thank you for sharing your thoughts and your talent!

    Blessed Be,
    ~Raven

  • ohhhh this is so true, teens can be hurtful and loving and all those emotions, you have penned a great write here and I am glad i read it!
    you are featured in todays Poem
    Blessings
    Rend


  • Lanasaur
    May 27
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    Very uniqe!!

  • but remember to spell check and you can remove this comment

  • This one ?I love

    you do it so well how those guys do it and that gossip is so rife in schools and universities and how painful and killing sometimes they can be. I was following your words panting from the speed of the events and that is great, getting one tired of all the wreck people and their gossip can cause

  • Please indicate which quote you chose for your prompt.

  • Ostria
    March 15

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    >.> Spellcheck is a great invention

    *clears throat*
    But besides that and popping out randomly out of no where *looks down and stabs the suggestion box* DON'T TELL ME WHAT TO DO! Anyways, good poem as usual Molly chan :3

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