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Come Back To Shadow Rest

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Audacious promises lingering
until dawn breaks on Shadow Rest
I shall remain here with thee.
Savoring thy whisper enraptured
by infinity song.


Thou icy sweet kisses, pure bliss
an never-ending melody.
Come back m' love?
'Twas one fortnight ago nay!
Carnal pleasures stills m' soul
wanton of yet another encounter.


I seek thy spirit to harmonize
as I recline 'pon thy stone
just as this red rose
fades...ravish me to
contentment; mark our journey
engrave m' heart I am
here for thee....

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  • a nice historical sort of tone here with longing for the departed.

    Congrats on the HM.


  • Blue30
    March 10

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    Good luck in the contest. This poem evoks such lamenting sentiments. I really enjoyed it, very nice job.


  • dwellondreams
    March 10
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    This is beautiful and adorable. Well written


  • The Drifter
    March 10
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    Haunting, sweet issued invitation--I loved it.
    Ah , to get such an invitation.

  • SWEET!!!

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