why did you do that to me
you made me fall in love with you
and now you leave me
what am i going to do
you said that you loved me
i know you have kids
and you want to see them
but what about me
now i'm told
you cold go to jail
how can i bear that
but then you tell me
those three little words
that make everything better
all you have to say is
I love you
and again i melt so easily
and it all over again
but only because
I love you way to much
i'm yours always baby
A contest entry
- Make Me Fall in Love with You... by tearyeyedbutterfly.
600 points, ended March 11, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~~Offer me your love -- I've given u mine~~(Prewrites allowed) by sweet innocence.
550 points, ended May 16, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
1 - 5 of 5
-
aww... a beautiful poem packed with true and honest emotions streaming from your heart.
well penned
and thanks for entering my contest -
very raw and sincere
the love is there with all alive feelings. Wonderful my dear, you wear your heart on your sleeve. I love honesty in writing and this is honest as if I could touch that heart, a vulnerable and innocent heart versus the experience of the other party that could be somehow caring but manipulative.
-
Passionate and lovely, I wanted to read this forever. I loved the sorrow throughout the poem and its story was truly awesome.
-
This is passionate and lovely! Nice job!
-
I thought that this was impressive...a very beautiful poem indeed...I just hope that this person loves you as much as you love them. Great write. Keep it up!
Adding your comment:
1 - 5 of 5
