Verse 1
im walking away from the best thing in my life
before the day turns into night
and im leaving behind all the things that made me smile
before i lose this fight
Verse 2
cant keep this pretense up and i dont know what to do
im losing my mind and in turn im losing you
im alone and lost and lost and alone cant see a way thru
so before this night is out i'll dissapear
in a world i dont know
Chorus
i need to get back into me
need to find the one i recognise
that i left back along the way
on this road
Verse 3
cant stand to see you cry and im drowning in your tears
treading water in your pain
there's a storm approaching and the one thing that i fear
is that you'll be swept away
Author notes
just playing with complex lyric timing
What did you think
Comments
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I suggest you change regognise in the chorus to recognize.
.. It's well done, umm all I can say is throw up into some music.!♫
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this is so very nice ,good write.
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The sadness and longing in this is astounding. Yet I also see a strong resolve. Breath taking Mike.
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I thought this was amazing!! I know what it feels like when your going out of your mind and you feel like the others are slipping away from you...its enough to make you hate yourself.... Awesome write....keep it up!
-Megan
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