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Eternally Immortal

Incarnated optimism
the passed -invisible.

Existing ,
regardless of time.

Upcoming fortunes,
mishaps and tides,
Listening to eternal silence.

Spiritual,Intellectually inclined,
guiding us,through the dark days
which exist with no explanation.

Questioning buds,adolesence,
know not of what lives,
cornered to breathing lives

Cloudy skies,the magnificent hills,
a newborn,A mother's patience.

You may not see His miracles,
But He sees you.

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Segment 2-Option (a)

I would like to be your sister-For tearsofsilence

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  • tears.of.silence
    March 14

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    Welcome to my family as my sister. This was an excellent poem and I really liked how it flowed. Thank you for entering the contest and the best of luck to you.


  • pinkink
    March 10

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    "Spiritual,Intellectually inclined,
    guiding us,through the dark days
    which exist with no explanation."
    This struck me, I really liked it.

  • A-muse-in-writer
    March 10

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    Beautiful write

    Thank you for this marvellous first entry. Oh and I am not adding finalists until I judge so don't get disheartened, lol.


    • Anu-Nataraj
      March 10
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      thank u judge !
      good luck judging !!!
      hehe..its aite !!!
      I tried to avoidas many filler words as possible !

      good luck !
      <3
      ~Anagha


  • SimplyNoodle
    March 10
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    Awh wodnerfuly written, good luck in the contest sis! Keep writting.
    ~ Chelsey

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