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Warring With Wet Wood

Quite the coronary conflict struck my brow,
and I stopped to switch a wheel and stow
thoughts of other does.

How did I expect a spark,
eying snatch
with no bite to match
my bark?

I heard tell of hell-
bent woodsmen
holding fire through a downpour,
and can only hope to store tinder
for the coming war. 

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