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almost magnolias

it was sort of spring.

the nearly warm, wet air kissed my cheek,
soaked in the sent of almost magnolias and
not quite crocuses, quietly whispering
the promise of roses.

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  • HollyLouise
    March 23

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    Loving it. So short yet sweet.

    "soaked in the sent of almost magnolias and
    not quite crocuses, quietly whispering
    the promise of roses."
    These are my favourite lines.

    Holly.


  • thelordreigns gold member
    March 11
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    Beautiful, fragrant, and filled with hope for tomorrow!

    - joanne -