it was sort of spring.
the nearly warm, wet air kissed my cheek,
soaked in the sent of almost magnolias and
not quite crocuses, quietly whispering
the promise of roses.
A contest entry
- [so i felt like the biggest asshole, when i killed your rock & roll!] yup! IT'S QUICKIE TIME! by ylova.
700 points, ended March 30, 20 entries
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Comments
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Loving it. So short yet sweet.
"soaked in the sent of almost magnolias and
not quite crocuses, quietly whispering
the promise of roses."
These are my favourite lines.
Holly.
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Beautiful, fragrant, and filled with hope for tomorrow!
- joanne -



